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Plot-
Student goes through scial trama and then snaps on the school she's going to.
1- Starts out as her coming from her dorm, walks into eat at the lunch room, eats slowly and quietly without emotion, leaves her small group of "Friends" and goes into the school with weapons in her bag, and her coat, the bell rings and students shuffel to class.
<Insert odd transition to the day before>
2- The day before
trouble with friends shows up, depression kicks in again, "coaches" and family trouble starts up, talks with a friend and then sees her crush, she turns all shy and says nothing but feels really empty inside after. Leaves, finds his brother (whom she talks with more then her chrush) leaves again and gets into a bit more trouble with people, then goes to sleep, that night...awakes with a new view on life..and not a very good one.
3- Goes to school
as 1 is brought back to view, slowly sets the bomb in her bag in the commens and holds weapons under her coat (you know the regular stuff) goes to class wondering if it's ok or not, then smiles as the bomb goes off blowing the empty commens to rubble. School is evacuated as students flee to the football stadium.
4- Empty hallways
Wandering the empty hallways officers and teachers look around for clues to what might have happened, She stands there looking on ward as they prove themselves to turly be stupid. raises a gun to her lips and kisses the barrel, points the gun at one officer and shoots him, walking off slowly she hears cries in the background as he lays on the ground writhering.
5- The stadium
Walking outside while everyone is still being questioned she holds the guns in the air and fires it twice. screams fill the air and then a dead silence falls over everyone....
6- "I wasn't good enough..."
She stands in the middle of the football field crying and holding the gun at her side, her body is shaking and she looks up at everyone scream at the top of her lungs she points the gun at the crowd who scatters quickly, "I wasn't good enough!!" fireing again her crush rushes at her and she turns on her heel in fear of being caught then runs back to the blown up school. she fights with him in the hallway for a long time and finally is shot in the shoulder.
7- the ride home.
She holds his hand tightly as they load her into the ambulance and pulls him into, she gasps for air as they set her down hard, her vision blurrs as her spirt lifts over her and looks down on everyone, her eyes glass over and things turn black.
8- End?
Do you think it should end just yet? lol





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